Rough Cut

This is a very rough cut of my work so far. I still need to add some more diegetic sound and transitions. I would also like to spend more time editing to neaten it up.

Shot list

Just a list of the shots I used when shooting my film (in chronological order)

1. shot of parents room-mid shot
2. slow pan of childs room-mid shot
3. slow pan of another childs room-mid shot
4. slow pan of hallway-mid shot
5. shot of toilet-mid shot
6. tap-close up
7. esme walking out of bathroom-mid shot
8. door open-close up
9. walks through door-close up
10. door closes-close up
11. picks up ipod-mid shot
12. pick up speaker-close up
13. open up speaker-close up
14. turn on speaker-close up
15. plug in speaker-close up
16. play music-mid shot
17. brushes hair in the mirror-over the sholder shot
18. esme walking out of room-canted angle
19. speaker gets grabbed-top shot slow zoom

I used the mixture of mid and close ups to try and increase and then decrease the speed of how my film looks a lot to make it more interesting to watch.

Ident problems

My original ident was to small so that when I imported it into premier pro it was only in the middle of the screen and had a lot of empty space around it. Because of this I decided I was going to have to make a new ident that was the correct size.

I changed my ident a lot from the original idea. I changed the name to "Voltartworks" and I changed the image from a quick animation to a complicated and slightly gothic style animation. I am happier with how this one looks and I feel that it has a more proffesional feel to it.

My new ident:



Ident

 

This is my ident that I am going use in my film. I like the cartoon look it has and I think it works well with the name "street kid films." I also like it being in black and white

Practise ident

 

This is a practise Ident I did based on the work of Saul Bauss